>>>Hi,
>>>The only error I can see is:-
>>>
>>>SEX: Not yet. Still waiting for the right person. Should be:- With Self i.e. He has already found the right person.
>>
>>Another good one would be "last held position: horizontal".
>
>Or "Missionary"

That suggestion wouldn't come from me, a known agnostic. But it did cross (not the religious symbol, but a verb) my mind.