>>>I think many social-conservatives religeous people believe their religion is the correct one and others are inferior and not deserving of respect. The intent of your liberal misguided school board is to make the offended minority feel equal, the intent of the social-conservatives most humans is to make value judgements on others and make their kind feel superior.
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>>Fixed that for you.
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>Thanks Dan,
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>But if you are going to be my editor, you should know I am a very bad speller and will rely on you to correct my mistakes. I think you may have added one more spelling error, we will have to work on this.
Now after a quick check if I were the editor for the editor, I would remove the word "the" which precedes the second "social-conservatives", as it is not required. :)
So it would look like this:
the intent of the social-conservatives most humans is to make value judgments on others and make their kind feel superior.
If I were your editor I would have only corrected the spelling mistakes (in bold) and allow the original message to stay as you wrote it.
An editor should not censure and require that a writer conform to “the correct political standard”, unless it is done by a totalitarian regime, in which case such actions are to be expected! :)
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