>>If you fancy swapping drafts for perusal and criticism, I could always send you mine. I sent it to a friend for constructive critique, in the hope that a bit of encouragement might spur me on. It took him so long to get round to it that I'd lost the impetus - and than he only went and done and CRITICISED it anyway! MO-FO! :-)
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>A little free and unsolicited advice, something I learned while teaching: If you guys do this, remember to point out the stuff you really like as well as that which needs fixing.
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Terry did, and so will I if asked. I took his comments as entirely constructive.