>>I loved the scene where Franklin, Adams, and Jefferson are reviewing Jefferson's written words and Franklin changes "sacred and undeniable" to "self evident" with really no discussion from the other two :o)
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>But I also like the way Jefferson is played - and that expression on his face when they question even a word of his original text and his assurance that he has labored over every word and used exactly the words he wanted ( though probably realized that in a room with Franklin and Adams it was one of those few times when there really was more brilliance in the room "than when Thomas Jefferson dined alone" )
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Just a minor and unimportant stylistic question: are you going to keep doing that with spaces inside of your parentheses? It's acceptable programming style but not proper English grammar AFAIK. Or has that changed?

(Sorry for being an old fussbudget <g>).