>>>>I loved the scene where Franklin, Adams, and Jefferson are reviewing Jefferson's written words and Franklin changes "sacred and undeniable" to "self evident" with really no discussion from the other two :o)
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>>>But I also like the way Jefferson is played - and that expression on his face when they question even a word of his original text and his assurance that he has labored over every word and used exactly the words he wanted ( though probably realized that in a room with Franklin and Adams it was one of those few times when there really was more brilliance in the room "than when Thomas Jefferson dined alone" )
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>>Just a minor and unimportant stylistic question: are you going to keep doing that with spaces inside of your parentheses? It's acceptable programming style but not proper English grammar AFAIK. Or has that changed?
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>>(Sorry for being an old fussbudget <g>).
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>Didn't even realize they were there - not doing it consciously. Do I do that all the time? Does seem more readable, though I suppose it isn't stylistically correct. ( Maybe it is a preference of the Voices in my Head. )
Agree with you that it looks better, and do the same thing in code. It just ain't proper English, though <g>.
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