Tamar,
You say:
Avoid the word "utilize." There's no situation in which "utilize" is a better choice than "use."also while you're at it could you add to the article:
Avoid the word "basically." There's no situation in which "basically" makes any difference to the sense of the sentence.
>>The moronic rule of thumb would appear to be "if the sentence requires a pronoun, replace it with one of those pronouns with 'self/selves' on the end"
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>Yeah, drives me nuts, too. Here's what I have about this on my website (
http://www.tomorrowssolutionsllc.com/writingtips.htm):
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>Don't abuse the "self" words. These words ("myself," "yourself," etc.) belong in a sentence only if the corresponding pronoun has already appeared. For example, this is correct:
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>"I'll take care of it myself."
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>But this is wrong:
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>"He had a meeting with John and myself."
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>That should be:
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>"He had a meeting with John and me."
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>Tamar
- Whoever said that women are the weaker sex never tried to wrest the bedclothes off one in the middle of the night
- Worry is the interest you pay, in advance, for a loan that you may never need to take out.