I recognize myself in the first two lines: "He was a hard-headed man, he was brutally handsome"
>There were lines on the mirror, lines on her face....
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>>Life in the Fast Lane. You can't contradict The Eagles.
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>>>Aha! Another one. My niece also calls it the 'fast lane'. It's the
passing lane!!! ;)
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>>>As I pointed out once before, an idiot is anybody who drives slower than you, and a maniac is anyone who drives faster.
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>>>>Well, that's their fault then. They remind me of the people who drive 45 in the fast lane on my way home. Get outta my way!
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>>>>>It's not just a readability issue on removing extra messages. It has to do also with data transfer. Believe it or not, there are still people today using dial up and being charged per byte transfer.
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>>>>>>I am a top poster. I think it works well and I don't even have to remove the extra messages to enhance readability.