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16/11/2009 11:46:06
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Business
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Creative writing
Title:
Miscellaneous
Thread ID:
01434893
Message ID:
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>>>Hi everybody,
>>>
>>>I've just noticed that I used this badly written phrase: "However, for my purpose this class I created, suited the purpose the best. "
>>>
>>>How it can be re-phrased?
>>>
>>>Thanks a lot in advance.
>>
>>Rich's is fine. I'd probably have written it as: This class I created best suits my purpose.
>
>I agree, but I prefer Alan's phrase.

I think I like Alan's better too.

The only problem here is that in the above phrase I made a reference to another class and I wanted to clarify why did I use my class and not the alternative, thus the "However".

In other words, the whole paragraph right now is:

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I want to say, that there are other solutions available for this problem, such as class by Dorin Vasilescu File 31183 at www.universalthreads.com Downloads section.

However, this class I created suited the purpose best.
If it's not broken, fix it until it is.


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