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16/11/2009 15:08:08
 
 
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16/11/2009 12:03:51
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Forum:
Business
Category:
Creative writing
Title:
Miscellaneous
Thread ID:
01434893
Message ID:
01435005
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29
>>>>>Hi everybody,
>>>>>
>>>>>I've just noticed that I used this badly written phrase: "However, for my purpose this class I created, suited the purpose the best. "
>>>>>
>>>>>How it can be re-phrased?
>>>>>
>>>>>Thanks a lot in advance.
>>>>
>>>>Rich's is fine. I'd probably have written it as: This class I created best suits my purpose.
>>>
>>>I agree, but I prefer Alan's phrase.
>>
>>I think I like Alan's better too.
>>
>>The only problem here is that in the above phrase I made a reference to another class and I wanted to clarify why did I use my class and not the alternative, thus the "However".
>>
>>In other words, the whole paragraph right now is:
>>
>>----------------------
>>I want to say, that there are other solutions available for this problem, such as class by Dorin Vasilescu File 31183 at www.universalthreads.com Downloads section.
>>
>>However, this class I created suited the purpose best.
>
>While there are other solutions available to resolve this issue (such as the class by Dorin Vasilescu, File #31183 available at www.levelextreme.com in the Downloads section) this class best suits my purpose.

Perfect. That'll teach me to start typing before I read the whole thread. ;)
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