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>>Hi everybody,
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>>What would be a better way to word the message:
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>>This guest can not be deleted because there is associated sales activity
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>>This guest can not be deleted because there are associated sales activities
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>>or
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>>is where a third better way?
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>>Thanks in advance.
>
>This guest can not be deleted because HE HAS associated sales activity

What if this is a "she" guest?
If it's not broken, fix it until it is.


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