>>1. Near the end of first paragraph -- "By the end, you'll see why businesses and other organizations see the value of OLAP databases." This is a minor quibble but one word, organizations, does it. Businesses are organizations.
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>Isn't it what he is saying? "businesses and other organizations" thus business are organizations, but there are other organizations that are not business
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>On the other hand "Buried at sea" does not seem right, it should be "submerged" or "drowned" :)

I agree with what you say and also with the point you are making ;-)

The Canucks took the Hawks out after a scare. I don't even care who wins the Cup now.