Now here is something more upbeat. You may not read many sports books but it you ever do you could do a lot worse then "7 Seconds or Less" by Jack McCallum, a fly on the wall account of the Phoenix Suns' 2005-2006 season which I have been reading lately
Before you toss out any more remarks about grammar, you should take a break and read about restrictive/nonrestrictive clauses and the use of that/which.