I'm trying to figure out who the target audience is for that site. The majority of Americans read at a 5th grade level and wouldn't have any idea what's being said. It's supposed to be a news story/commentary, not trying to win a prize in literature.I'll pass on trying again, I just can't stomach it.
It reminds me of a local radio food critic here in SLC. He. Reads. Each. Word. Like. It's. A. Separate. Sentence. And I can't even describe his ennunciation.
>Seriously? That's the literary equivalent of an
ad hominem attack (
ad librinem ? )
>
>Hold your sensitive nose and keep going, it's an interesting read.
Craig Berntson
MCSD, Microsoft .Net MVP, Grape City Community Influencer