>Hi,
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>I am writing the release notes of our iOs app and I want to use the word 'mobile' somewhere in the description. I am looking for suggestions on how to use this word. Here is an example of a sentence where I am attempting to use it:
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>The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely in
a mobile mode. The last phrase, in bold font, is what I don't like and need to change.
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>TIA for any input.
The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely
using a mobile device?