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Using word 'mobile'
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17/05/2017 10:42:20
John Baird
Coatesville, Pennsylvania, United States
 
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Business
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Technical writing
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Thread ID:
01651144
Message ID:
01651151
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>>>Hi,
>>>
>>>I am writing the release notes of our iOs app and I want to use the word 'mobile' somewhere in the description. I am looking for suggestions on how to use this word. Here is an example of a sentence where I am attempting to use it:
>>>
>>>The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely in a mobile mode. The last phrase, in bold font, is what I don't like and need to change.
>>>
>>>TIA for any input.
>>
>>The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely using a mobile device?
>
>Sounds excellent. Thank you!

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