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Using word 'mobile'
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17/05/2017 16:49:38
 
 
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17/05/2017 09:02:20
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Business
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Technical writing
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Thread ID:
01651144
Message ID:
01651172
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>Hi,
>
>I am writing the release notes of our iOs app and I want to use the word 'mobile' somewhere in the description. I am looking for suggestions on how to use this word. Here is an example of a sentence where I am attempting to use it:
>
>The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely in a mobile mode. The last phrase, in bold font, is what I don't like and need to change.
>


The app will eliminate the paperwork, allowing the staff to process the orders remotely using their mobile device.
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