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From
12/08/2017 12:15:37
Dragan Nedeljkovich (Online)
Now officially retired
Zrenjanin, Serbia
 
 
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11/08/2017 18:05:21
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Forum:
Travel
Category:
Australia
Miscellaneous
Thread ID:
01653105
Message ID:
01653257
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50
>>The "now" is superfluous, completely fucking up the intent of the sentence. If it's so good to quit smoking, it should be good anytime. Why now? What about other times? Not so good? That's the other half of what's wrong with the sentence. And the obvious "when is that 'now'?" question - at the time when the sentence was composed, written down, printed, read for the first time, seen on a thrown away empty pack months later? It even isn't clear whether it's "quitting now" or "now reduces".
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>Verbal games are fun, but usually fruitless and often annoying.
>Saying "Now is a good time to do x" doesn't even remotely imply that other times are not as good.

Not to me. Why now? Unless it's a common thing to say "now" and mean "anytime", which would baffle me if it were so. Still, something of the kind would be a far better way to convey the message. However, trying to cram too much into the space of half a pack, in large ominously warning font, introduces ambiguity and confusion, i.e. unintended consequences.

>"Note: If interested please send your updated resume to idiot@idiots.com and include your salary requirement along with your contact details with a suitable time when we can reach you. If you know of anyone in your sphere of contacts, who would be a perfect match for this job then, we would appreciate if you can forward this posting to them with a copy to us."
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>Good thing he mentioned "updated" isn't it?

Sure... makes you think your chances are far better than those of the morons who keep sending resumes with last six years missing. There must be thousands of those slobs, so they have to remind everybody.

>I was going to suggest an unsuitable time, but thank goodness, he straightened me out.
>I do that all the time- tell people to call me at midnight, when I'm sleeping.
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>Hmm " a perfect match"? How about a stupendous match that approaches perfection?
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>It would be a really neat trick if I could find one outside my "sphere of contacts" (I hereby nominate that phrase for verbosity honors - 2017)

Aaaaaargh! I've spent years arranging my contacts into a cube! And now they want them in a sphere! (the two pages of unprintables omitted here)

back to same old

the first online autobiography, unfinished by design
What, me reckless? I'm full of recks!
Balkans, eh? Count them.
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