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Business
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Titre:
Divers
Thread ID:
01434893
Message ID:
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>>Hi everybody,
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>>I've just noticed that I used this badly written phrase: "However, for my purpose this class I created, suited the purpose the best. "
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>>How it can be re-phrased?
>>
>>Thanks a lot in advance.
>
>Rich's is fine. I'd probably have written it as: This class I created best suits my purpose.

I agree, but I prefer Alan's phrase. However, I'd probably leave out the "I created" since it is already known which class she is referring to:

"However, this class best suits my purpose."
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