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30/08/2010 17:48:06
Kevin Goff
Pennsylvania, United States
 
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Business
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Technical writing
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Re: Singular or plural
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Avoid passive voice.....try this...

"You cannot delete a guest with associated sales activity" (or whatever the associated data happens to be)
"Run, you clever boy....and remember"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8U4Y2Uv8ArM

"My survival...my living proof"
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