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30/08/2010 17:48:06
Kevin Goff
Pennsylvania, United States
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Re: Singular or plural
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>Avoid passive voice.....try this...
>
>"You cannot delete a guest with associated sales activity" (or whatever the associated data happens to be)

Yeah that's even better.
ICQ 10556 (ya), 254117
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