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02/06/2014 19:06:38
 
 
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02/06/2014 18:31:05
John Ryan
Captain-Cooker Appreciation Society
Taumata Whakatangi ..., New Zealand
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Health
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Title:
Miscellaneous
Thread ID:
01600366
Message ID:
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My objection has been, and continues to be with the use of "We need to ...".

Words have meanings:

1. "We": you're speaking on behalf of the reader, when you have no such authority
2. "need to": you're telling the reader what must be done. Again, with no authority

It that what you're trying to convey?
Regards. Al

"Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent." -- Isaac Asimov
"Never let your sense of morals prevent you from doing what is right." -- Isaac Asimov

Neither a despot, nor a doormat, be

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