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>Hmmm... "School Chess Coach Wanted" ?
>:)

:) No, here is the thing:

I know a professional chess coach, who was a coach back in former USSR, then moved to Israel and was a coach there and now lives in Columbus for a year. Our school was looking for a volunteer to be a chess coach. I organized a meeting between Yuri (the coach) and our school principal. However, she was not interested in that idea :( But she mentioned, that PTA may try to do so. I then contacted PTA members asking an urgent PTA board meeting to discuss this idea... They were not enthusiastic about it either, but asked me to prepare a flyer.

So, I took a picture from the link you gave me (second picture on the 2nd page) and came up with this text:

Would you be interested to have your child playing chess with the professional chess coach? Well, now you may have this opportunity for $10 a month. It is up to us, parents, to make this happen. If you support this idea, you may contact Nadya Nosonovsky by phone nnnnnn or e-mail mmmmm


But I do not like this text. Can you help me to improve it?
If it's not broken, fix it until it is.


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